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Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby Wv_Hawk_vW » Mon Jan 09, 2012 2:27 am

DEEP SPACE wrote:Chaos and Cosmos
The storyline:
The story passes on the year 2500.
Chapter 1, the beginning.
year 2500, one of the Chaos grandsons has arrived on a planet with fuzzle creatures, the doom begins and 1 fuzzle has sended to survive on another planet, his name is Surigon. The fuzzle has arrived on the Earth and now goes on a big adventure to find the Chaos grandson (that has arrived on the Earth) and defeat it.


I'm not really sure where to start with this. Deep Space, could you do the honors please?
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby DEEP SPACE » Mon Jan 09, 2012 6:51 am

mmm...

thanks to reply my question. ;D

But there is a problem:
DEEP SPACE wrote:"This story is only mine, so, don't post part of the story, i'm i the only that can make this story because, i have all this on my mind, other members only can think about my story".


thanks for having wanted to help, but this story is only mine.

In the future i will have "free story parts" that the other members can put its invented parts of my story.

the free story parts are common on the chapters 7,8 and 10.

please stay tuned for the story.

About Surigon: Surigon is a character that i created on a battle game called "Chaos Faction".
On it sequel, it character code is this:

4)Surigon
13,34,36,25,16,34,34

all the 32 heros are created on that game also. The four is the ordinary place of Surigon on my list.

I have about 5 list for games that i still playing:

1: Characters and maps of Chaos Faction 2.
2: Locations on SNEE.
3: Items of Drop Dead 3.
4: List of the existing things on Nulll Games. (This will by very important to my for when I created my image collection).
5: The fifth one doesn't is from a game, is just related to the Microsoft clip organizer. (This plus other Microsoft office programs are equal to a fun thing for me. ;D )

PD: Don't worry Greywing, i just dedicated one list to your page. :D
is the forth because, i joined to this page after playing that games. :)
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby idea bulb » Mon Jan 09, 2012 4:23 pm

everyone can think of somthing new i know i am a person reliant on thought
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby Wv_Hawk_vW » Mon Jan 09, 2012 4:27 pm

As am I. Still, I thought that deep space was telling us we had to post chapters outside of his thread, not that we couldnt post them at all. part of the magic of my roleplay is that its flexible. people can completely skewer it, and I can usually find some way to fix it. if I cant, then I usually can still change the story for the better. at first I was thinking about leaving my roleplay closed off, but that wouldnt be as fun, or effective. now I have a crew of 3 (space-mariner #51, chyriax, and myself) and were great at storymaking.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby idea bulb » Mon Jan 09, 2012 4:29 pm

there can not be a group that everyone thinks the same way everyone thinks differently.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby DEEP SPACE » Mon Jan 09, 2012 9:38 pm

Chaos and cosmos 1: The beginning

Episode 1: The end of Daif

Planet Daif; a planet located on the sector 57 of the Milky Way at 68.672 light years from the Earth
Daif is more close to its star than the Earth, so the climate on Daif is more high, so all this planet is covered by very wet jungles, excepting the ecuatorial zone, that is very hot that instead to have a wet jungle, it have a dry desert.

Image On the planet Daif the jungles are the most common.

The intelligent life presence are the fuzzles, Very haired gorilalike animals, that lives on high tech houses on the trees

They are peacefull and happy.

But one day on the year 2502.
A strange thing has fall from the space, is the Chaos grandson.
It attack and destroyed all the civilization of the fuzzles.

Only one fuzzle can by saved, his name is Surigon and is bought today, he has sended out of Daif.

One year later he has ended on the sector 202, and falls on the planet Earth, one the Mount Blanck, on the Alps (the section of the Alps called Chamonix).

Surigon was finded by a guy called Andy Le Gurt, and he care Surigon on his house, he cares Surigon as a human, he teach Surigon things about humans, (because, he recognizes Surigon as a alien) like the human idiom, and Surigon helps him with hes works (fuzzles are very strong also).
One month later, Surigon has founded a note about the fuzzles on the pod what he has arrived on the Earth, and also he can still recognize the fuzzle idiome.
In that way, Surigon was remember all, also when the chaotic CGS was attacked daif.
5 Months later, a blue strange UFO is exploring the Alphs:

Andy: AA!
Surigon: No AA. Is he.
Andy: who is "he"?
Surigon: the evil creature that has destroyed my home.

The blue UFO was escaped to the East, and Surigon wants to chase it.
For this, he left Andy and goes on his own adventure to revenge his planet:

Andy (sad and cry): Goodbye Surigon, my unique "son". Snif Snif...

___________________________________________________________________________
To be continued...
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby DEEP SPACE » Fri Feb 24, 2012 11:43 pm

Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning

Episode 2: Hunting on France

After left Andy Le Gurt, Surigon go to France, where he arrives on a town, but the things here are not peacefully.
Surigon see debris and rubbles arround the town. Surigon ask to a woman he finded if she know what happened:
She first ask if Surigon is confiliated to the Aliens-Aliens and it seems that all people ask that, next to that:

Surigon: What happened here?
Woman: The animals of the zoo has escaped from it, and have started to attack all the people and buildings.
Surigon: Where i can get more info?
Woman: On the zoo, i think.

Surigon goes to the zoo. Here he finds a guard:

Surigon: I want to enter the zoo, and talk with the owner.
Guard: Sorry, to zoo is closed for now, before all the animals where traped.
Surigon: i'm in a important mission, and i wanted to help on the way, my species are powerfull, i really can help.
Guard: How many years you have?
Surigon: 1 year ago.
Guard: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Surigon punch the guard and strikes him to the wall.
Finally he enters to the zoo and go to the owner's office:

Surigon: what happened with the animals?
Zoo owner: Ok, a zookepeer has missed to close all animals cages after feed them. Looks that he was drunk. I fired him.
The police have traped most of the animals, but the hardest one wasen't have been traped.
Here there is a list of those animals untraped:

    jiraffe
    tucan
    tiger
    hippo
    rhino
    polar bear
    elephant
    spider monkey
    swamp cocodrile
    mountain gorilla

Surigon: there are 10.
Zoo owner: yes, i will give to you some equip... what! he is gone.

Surigon go to trap those animals:

Surigon finds the jiraffe eating trees on the park.
Surigon climb the trees and jump over the jiraffe neck; the jiraffe moves his neck from all sides, but Surigon able to stand firm and the giraffe gets tired and falls.

The tucan is also on the park, and is eating fruits on a tree. surigon catch it from its back.

Surigon find the tiger on the library, and is breaking some books with his claws.
Surigon grab some books and throbs it on the tiger face, the tiger go to surigon and surigon punches him on his belly.

The hippo his on the swimming pool, surigon gets scared for his huge theets, but finally grabs a big rubber ball and put it on the hippo's mouth, the police traps it.

Surigon wasn't found the rhino, the rhino found him and he try to stub his horn on surigon's body.
Surigon do a imitation of a bullfighter and grabs a red rug of dress from the rubble.
Surigon cheats the rhino and finally the rhino gets stabed on the wall.

Surigon found the polar bear, but the police has finally traped it with no problem.

Surigon found the elephant. He go to the shop and buys penauts.
Surigon drops the penauts, the elephant goes to eat them; the police traps the elephant.

The spider monkey is on a tree, and surigon climb that tree, and grabs the monkey from fis tail.

Surigon finds the swamp cocodrile on the park lake eating some ducks.
Surigon go to swim and battles with the cocodrile.
The cocodrille bites surigon leg and he get stuned of the pain.
The police traps the cocodrile with 4 nets.

A medic heals Surigon's leg:

Medic: Surigon, you have doed a good work today.
Surigon: The gorilla is still, free.
Officer: Yes.
Medic: Ok, now you can rest... he escaped.
Officer: Nothing can stop him.

[Surigon finds the gorilla.
A battle starts.

Code: Select all

Surigon punch the gorila's belly, but it has no effect.
The gorilla punch surigon's face.
The police attack the gorila from it back with a taser


Medic: Surigon, you are in a new world, i know that you are not HU and not AA, but all have problems with the new things.
Surigon: Thanks.
Zoo owner: thank you, you saved the town and my zoo. Thanks.
Police Officer: Ok, we haven't can traped the animals with your help, thanks little friend.
Woman: thanks to help my fa... he is gone.

Surigon left the town, and try to find some way to go faster to the East and find the blue UFO where CGS is flying.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________
To be continued...
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby idea bulb » Sat Feb 25, 2012 1:28 am

Who wrote those statements because I wasn't here to write them or was I. this may have been a dead thread that has reasently been revived.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby DEEP SPACE » Sat Feb 25, 2012 2:52 am

idea bulb wrote:Who wrote those statements because I wasn't here to write them or was I. this may have been a dead thread that has reasently been revived.


Yes, and just for directly give an end (because it has ins't finished).

I think that the Chapter 1 is just the most cheap of the 10 chapters of Chaos and Cosmos.
The things will become more great with the apparition of Bismine man, my best character. (because is the best minded)
But Surigon has more importance on the first 3 chapters.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby DEEP SPACE » Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:34 am

I edited the end of this chapter so i can enlarge this chapter.

See above.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby DEEP SPACE » Sun Apr 22, 2012 8:08 am

Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.

Episode 3: Surigon arrives Paris

Surigon was lost on the forest for a plent of hours, but he was finded a guy that help him.

Surigon: Hello, i'm lost here. can you help me.
Guy: I was exploring this place, but i can help you. Where do you want to go?
Surigon: Its confidential.
Guy: You talk like a American. Sure do you want to go here?
Surigon: What is America?
Guy: .............. I left you on Paris, the city where i live. Its the capital of this country. Did you know?
Surigon: Yes.
Guy: o you want to go to Paris?
Surigon: Yes.

2 hours later Surigon arrives Paris.

Surigon: Nice city, is best than the town a have arrived yesterday.
Guy: Is that city where the animals of the zoo was escaped.
Surigon: Yes i helped on catching them.
Guy: I know that.
Surigon: So... Do you know me?
Guy: Yes, and i know you are a alien.
Surigon: Ok.

Surigon arrives Guy's home.

Guy: welcome to my home.
Surigon: Ok, i'm tired now, i want to sleep.

Surigon go to sleep on a sofa.

Surigon: Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z...............................

______________________________________________________________________
To be continued...
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos chapter 1

Postby DEEP SPACE » Thu Jul 19, 2012 11:41 pm

CAC is back to life!
I cannot edit the previous episode, so i left it is.

Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning

Episode 4: A day on Paris

Its being the morning on the city of Paris.
The guy has wake up, he goes to his sofa wheres Surigon was sleeping, but in really he is isn't here, Surigon has scaped again, and is running on the streets of Paris.
The guy has outside his house, and it was running to find Surigon, he say to himself:

"Why i didn't take a photo of him, i would have been make Wanted posters for get him"

A reporter comes near him, it says that on the Eifel Tower there is a Gorila like creature, The guy says that it is Surigon his pet, and a conversation starts:

Reporter: Its your pet! i know all gorila species, and i never see one of that is your pet.
Guy: It is an alien, not a bad one, and is not related to the AA.
Reporter: then, how do you get it?
Guy: I found it on a forest.
Reporter: Well, it probably fall from the sky.

The guy and the news team go to the tower.
Meanwhile, Surigon was reach the peak of the tower; he shout:

"I did it, i climb this tower"

The guy and the news team coming to the scene, and the guy shout to Surigon if he can hear him (whit a megaphone). Surigon was heared him, and another conversation starts:

Surigon: You again?
Guy: Yes, come back here now!
Surigon: who are you to tell me?
Guy: Your own.
Surigon: WTF? I'm not your pet, i'm a sentient alien with own personality.
Guy: Okay, well, do you want to be my friend, instead of my pet?
Surigon: This time you said the correct words, so yes.
Guy: Other question, what are you doing here?
Surigon: Testing my climbing ability.
Guy: Well.

Surigon goes down, and all is resolved.
The guy carry Surigon to his house again, and all go to sleep.
_______________________________________________________________________________
To be continued...
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