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Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2017 8:27 am
by Greywing
Sure, it's the 'general' forum after all.

As long as it's not breaking any common sense & decency rules.

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2017 5:55 pm
by DEEP SPACE
Joacobanfield2 wrote:I wonder... can we put non -Xyth stories here, too?


They are actually a few of them that are non-Xyth related, so yeah!

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2017 8:29 pm
by Joacobanfield2
Excellent!

Go forth, my creations!!!!!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c0W ... p=drivesdk

Tales Of A Reset Mind, rewritten pretty much from scratch and given a whole new ending and a bazillion new characters.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GBk ... p=drivesdk

War of a Thousand Worlds, the sequel that goes a bit Meta and is much shorter. It has also pretty much nothing to do except for some characters appearing, as the story follows other plot threads entirely, taking part in another place, with a more serious plot.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IPv ... p=drivesdk

Tales of the Terrible Trio. An experiment done on a dare. It eventually got made into the third part of the story. Who knew that using characters that were NOT yours was so hard?

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2018 12:32 pm
by Joacobanfield2
Blast from the past! It's been a while for me. Please ignore idiot-me up top, on the previous page and everywhere else. (Sorry. I was a moron back then.)
After I'm done with The Falcon Writer...and Their Forgotten Story...I may just finish what I started.

I'm here because I finished high school and when I was doing the Final Evacuation of my Locker I found my draft for one of the scenes of The Tales of Flagship Hiroto and boom, I remembered everything. I even showed it to Hawk.

Sorry for putting y'all through idiot-me. Also, I got better as a writer and won the school competitions again.

No, Grey. This is not a challenge. And definitely not for a writing duel until Google docs lags.

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2018 7:59 am
by Greywing
Congrats on winning the school competitions.
I'm no good at telling if someone's writing is bad or not - but if you're winning competitions it can't be bad.

In my opinion, as long as you're having fun though, don't worry too much about what other think or might think. I've been putting out music for years and years - some of it has barely been listened to, some of it has been labelled as down-right shit, but that hasn't stopped me.

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2019 5:57 pm
by Joacobanfield2
Nulll records?

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Mon May 20, 2019 11:52 am
by Joacobanfield2
I have finished The Falcon Writer. It adds up to 237 pages and 95000 ish words.

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue May 21, 2019 7:40 am
by Greywing
Something you wrote?

That's pretty much novel sized at that word count :)

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue May 21, 2019 12:33 pm
by Joacobanfield2
Yup. Link should be a bit higher, pretty sure it's the last one.
But that was the practice book. Their Forgotten Story is going to be the real thing. I really like CYOAs and I'm finally going to get around to writing my own.

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2019 11:59 am
by Joacobanfield2
I've started Their Forgotten Story. Currently have a small branch ready for writing.

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue Nov 05, 2019 3:52 pm
by Joacobanfield2
Look up Operation Flâneur on Ao3 for a bit of a look back on my first real story.

Also, the mathematical community rejected my proposal to rename nullspace nulllspace.

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2019 7:13 pm
by Wv_Hawk_vW
Joacobanfield2 wrote:Look up Operation Flâneur on Ao3 for a bit of a look back on my first real story.

Also, the mathematical community rejected my proposal to rename nullspace nulllspace.


Here you go!

Joacobanfield2 wrote:I have finished The Falcon Writer. It adds up to 237 pages and 95000 ish words.


Hey Jo

Don't take this the wrong way

But F* you for having more words than me :p

I'm only up to 23,366 words. Thus far, each chapter has had about 10k words, and I'm cracking away at chapter 3.

I should be done writing it sometime this year, and done editing Chapter 3 sometime in 2020.

I have not edited this, but this is a compilation of Chapters 1 and 2. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QWtzerbMea1rtGvgi3Q0rVUbiuJGm7j9p8jS7f2Smaw/edit?usp=sharing

Once again, no editing, and it's incomplete. Chapter 3: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZIhtNhxReTd2NIR5DJTUS7Cgr0vBn_Ow9uZAby6FIkE/edit?usp=sharing

Re: Stories and fanfics.

Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2019 12:27 am
by Joacobanfield2
Can you turn on comments? That way I could suggest some stuff.

Also I wrote Operation Flâneur. I was experimenting.